Monday, September 27, 2010

Monday, Sep.27

We discussed Ohinata's reading today. We mainly covered her way of writing the essay. It was not very good, actually. I would like to read it in Japanese.
To tell you the truth, I didn't know that we had to read the Ohinata's reading by today and I have to say sorry to people who were in my group... Because I didn't know about the essay, I couldn't talk much in the group....>< What a shame! After the class, I read the Ohinata...even though it was too late... haha

When we write our essay, we have to be careful of the constructure of paragraph and try to make the essay coherrent. I thought that now we know how to write good essays, it is going to be useful when we check essays of others.

byebye!

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